Unexpected

Life is a puzzle we can’t solve

Whose door will the river of doubt knock tonight

With time I gave up believing in miracles

Caught in cyclone of emotions

Dealing with the random outcome of reality

Remained untitled to the pros and cons

Could not weigh out the balance of the burdens

Paragraphed in this narrative

Lives a thought alive for another day

At the height of default to custom

Till truth unravels itself

As it creeps upon us

The Unexpected Thought

Β©G.V Raghavasree


Rating: 1 out of 5.

66 Comments Add yours

    1. Thankyou so much ✌🌸😊

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  1. George F. says:

    Just let that river of doubt flow right past you…the miracles will return…

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    1. Hopefully it will. But this pandemic seriously screwing lives. Thankyou for dropping by. Good day George 😊

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  2. Saniya says:

    Beautiful piece!

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    1. Thankyou so much. Means a lot 🌸

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      1. Saniya says:

        You’re most welcome 🧑

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  3. Gottfried says:

    This piece is almost as beautiful as the writer

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    1. hahha thx. I will consider it as a complement from Mr Trafalgasqaure

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  4. Silver Stone says:

    Amazing poem, man! This is truly something πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

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    1. Thankyou so much. Really means a lot. Good day ✌🌸

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      1. Silver Stone says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜„

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  5. swabby429 says:

    simple and elegant

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    1. Thankyou so much. Means a lot πŸ™‚

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  6. Arooba says:

    😍😍 well said

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    1. Thankyou so much 🌸

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      1. Arooba says:

        πŸ˜‰ my pleasure

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  7. Perfectly precise and beautiful πŸ‘πŸ½πŸ’•

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    1. Thankyou so much.🌸🌸

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    1. Thankyou so much Emmanuel 😊

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  8. Where logic ends , life begins , when I stop trying to fit the puzzle pieces , they fall in place …

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    1. Yes quite true. Life never goes according to us. Thankyou for dropping by with your kind words πŸ˜‡πŸŒΈ

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  9. Nawazish says:

    This is so good! The first 2 lines are amazing!!❣❣

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    1. Thank you so much. Many more posts to come. Be posted. πŸ™‚

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    1. Appreciate you nominating me. Means a lot. I don’t promote awards dear. Hope you understand. Thankyou once again ❀✌

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  10. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    life is indeed a puzzlement!

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    1. Thankyou so much. Means a lot. HahH life has plans we will never understand

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      1. Plans? We have plans, then life changes them! πŸ˜€

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        1. Hahah true Jonathan. Have a great day ☺

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  11. wrong says:

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    1. Thankyou so much. Means a lot. I appreciate you nominating me but i don’t promote awards dear. Hope you understand. Good day

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      1. wrong says:

        It’s okay 😊

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        1. Thankyou for understanding πŸ™‚βœŒ

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    1. Thankyou so much. Means a lot. Sorry to say this I don’t promote awards. Hope you understand. Good day ✌

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      1. Thank you, no problem
        Appreciated

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  13. Live the Life you Love πŸ’“πŸ”₯

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  14. Awww thankyou so much. Yes I will and you too πŸ™‚βœŒ

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  15. I guess we need to keep our hopes up to live better lives.

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    1. Exactly my friend. Times like these we have move with the best foot forward. πŸ™‚βœŒπŸŒΈ

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  16. Marsha says:

    Hi Desert Flower, I enjoyed your puzzling poem about life. I can tell you love poetry. I love your style. Have you participated in Colleen Tanka Tuesday? They are a different style, but a real learning experience. Thanks for following my blog. I will be following yours as well. I couldn’t find an about page here. Your blog is beautiful, and I’m going to explore your women empowerment section. πŸ™‚ Marsha.

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    1. Hi there. Thankyou so much for dropping by with your ever so kind words. No I have not participated in Colleen Tanka Tuesdays. I would love. To check it out and learn a few things.
      You have a amazing blog. I guess I have to create my about page. I haven’t gave a thought to it yet. Thankyou for letting me know. Please do. Hope you have a great read.
      Good day ✌😊

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      1. Marsha says:

        The about page is the hardest thing to write, but your real followers will go straight there after they read your lastest post or two. I have revised mine quite a few times over the eight years to reflect changes in my life. There’s another page that is nice, but not as essential which is called New Here. That defines the purpose of your blog and what browsers might expect to find. It might even state what you are looking for from them – depending on what kind of a blog it is. Another couple of people that you might enjoy just for blogging tips are Hugh Roberts at https://hughsviewsandnews.com/, and Janice Wald at http://www.mostlyblogging.com/. And of course, my blog, Always Write. πŸ™‚

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        1. Thankyou so much. This really helped me out. I wrote the about page. Do check it out. Have a lovely day

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          1. Marsha says:

            So glad. I’ll check it out.

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          2. Marsha says:

            It is lovely, Raghavasree. I’m glad to know your real name. Desert flower is much easier. I love your picture, too. It makes you real. Before I became an educator, I was a dental assistant and receptionist/office manager. I had considered being a dental hygienist, but couldn’t stand the thought of being so old when I finished. – 19! LOL If not for missing a college chemistry class how different my life might have been. Good luck with your final year. I admire your tenacity and hard work, especially at such a young age.

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            1. Thankyou so much Marsha. Oh wow you got my name right. Haha I don’t mind being called Desert flower. Quite the suprise to hear that you were a dental assistant. Hahaha well dental education is tough but the student will power has to be tougher. I am sure you would have been a pro dental hygienist. Age is just a number in front of your passion. Thankyou so much. Really means a lot you dropping by. Your comment made my day. Have a great day. ❀✌

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              1. Marsha says:

                You too, Raghavasree.

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  17. Beautiful and pieces of puzzle kept in its proper verses. Lovely pictures too.

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    1. thankyou so much for you kind words. good day

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      1. You are always welcome dear. Good day to you too 😊😊😊😊

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  18. Joel Abakah says:

    This is quite the thought provoking poem. I love it!

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    1. Thankyou so much. Glad to see you like itπŸ™‚.

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    1. Thankyou so much πŸ™‚

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    1. Thankyou so much. will do

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