Full Stop

I am done

Trying to give my best

Against the odds

To see my future goals

Burring in forest of unexplainable reasons

I didn’t even get the chance of second saying in all this

The door to opportunities is locked safe from my gaze

The saplings of my hard work have dried

To yeild nothing but misery and regret

Be postive the world said

For what reason has life left me to

Dreams shattered like broken glasses

Preyed on ego and pride

Clueless and living dead I turned inside

Can’t stop this comparing game

The pros of being mature has caught up with me finally…

The bitter irony finally rolled out the meaningless tears

To nothing but full stop

I ended with silence….

A bullet was not enough to quinch the truth

But the blood on the floor did justice to the pain

ยฉG.V Raghavasree


At some point all of us must have had a succidal thought brewing like a stew. Every challenge brings with it a outcome. The winners are paraded and justified. Does anyone think about the struggling loosers who are lost in between to the circumstances of life. It can be rather frustrating to see your hardwork go down the drain and have nothing to turn up at the end of the day.

Sometimes it’s hard to accept the full stop to a journey that you have worked for so hard and to start a new race all over again can be more than frustrating. It’s hardest to accept the reality and move on. But life is a challenge to the fittest. It’s our choice at the end of the day…All in our hands.

32 Comments Add yours

  1. Dulcy Singh says:

    Mindblowing ๐Ÿ‘such a beautiful creation

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  2. Sometimes, we’re, just, too STUCK, in the darkness of our own lives that we can’t, see the light, and we just have to, keep on, putting one foot in front of the other, even if we have to, drag our feet, because if we give up, we won’t know, what the future has in store…

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    1. Yes so very true. It’s hardest to accept it and drag to grab ourselves to that point. Thankyou so much for your ever so kind words. Appreciate it ๐Ÿ’žโœŒ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. What do you feel when you write something like this, I mean what are the emotions inside?
    These emotions are I think very relatable, feelings of frustration, failure and a question inside, are we are walking on an endless road with nothing in sight!

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    1. Well writting has always been therapeutic for me. I mostly feel what I write. Sometimes I manage well in putting my emotions down and sometimes that hunger of emotions is never gets satisfied. These current blog is a mixture of thoughts. Thankyou so much for dropping by . Have a great day โ˜บ

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      1. That’s great! Immersing oneself in those emotions to put it on paper is really difficult and u did a great job! kudos!

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        1. Thankyou so much. Glad to see you noticed ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Wow. This was hard to read, emotionally speaking. Well done.

    When you wrote “buring” – did you mean “burning”?

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    1. Thankyou so much Ben. Glad to see you emotionally connected to this post.
      Haha you have a eye for detail pal. It’s a dental slag. It’s a cutting instrument that cuts the hardest structure in human body-enamel. It is done with a bur and the process is called cutting or burring.

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      1. wow! learn something new every day!
        thanks!

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        1. Hahah Glad to help๐Ÿ™‚๐ŸŒธ

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    2. Joel Abakah says:

      I was also thinking it’s burning๐Ÿ˜…
      Now that she’s explained it I get that line now๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Hahah glad to hear man. Good day

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  5. kinge says:

    Life is a flow of ups and downs. Sometimes the lows are really low to a point of such thoughts but we can always rise above dissapointments and be better than we were. I hope you are well, feel comforted through the challenge and dissapointments you are facing.

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    1. Yes could not agree more to what you said. I will be alright. It’s just my way of healing. Thankyou so much for dropping by Kinge and for your kind words ๐Ÿ˜‡๐ŸŒธ

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  6. Well, welcome to the team ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thankyou for the invitationโœŒ๐ŸŒธ

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  7. This is kinda encouraging. Good one!

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    1. Thankyou ๐Ÿ™‚

      Like

  8. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    CHOOSE LIFE—NO MATTER HOW PAINFUL IT SEEMS! FROM ONE WHO HAD TO MAKE THAT CHOICE MORE THAN ONCE!

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    1. Thankyou so much Jonathan. Yes I will remember that ๐Ÿ˜Š๐ŸŒธ

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        1. ๐ŸŒธ๐ŸŒธ

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  9. Ajibola says:

    Life remains a journey for the tenacious souls, and if life is fair and easy it wonโ€™t be amazing. Thatโ€™s why it takes persistence to succeed in anything in life.

    Besides, what a good blog filled with awesome contents you have up here. Keep up the good work

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    1. Thank you so much. Truly means a lot. Have a great day

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    1. Thankyou ๐Ÿ™‚

      Like

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